Friday, November 1, 2013

City

The dark and decrepit city without sight of light
      A flower, petals falling 

1 comment:

  1. I assume you mean "petals"? It's interesting that, even given the similarity between Pound's comparison and yours (both usng the idea of petals), the tone is different, and what a reader sees differs, based on what you're comparing the petals to.

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